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Text translations needed!
« on: September 02, 2004, 12:56:53 PM »
Hi all!

We'd need a favor. We're looking for translation of the following paragraph:

Avast! antivirus is based on the comprehensive ALWIL Software scanning technology available since 1988. Featuring fast incremental updates and advanced multi-layer real-time protection of all infection vectors, it safeguards against virtually all kinds of malware. Avast! is offered in multiple editions, including the FREE Home Edition and the Network Edition designed for large corporate networks.

We'd need it in as many languages as possible -- but most importantly in languages that avast is localized to.

This paragraph will be presented on the Microsoft web site (including local Microsoft sites, hence the translation).


Of course, if any of the native English speakers here has something to say about the text, that would be very welcome as well... :)

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Vlk
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« Reply #1 on: September 02, 2004, 01:40:00 PM »
Dutch...

Avast! antivirus is gebaseerd op de ALWIL Software scan technologie die sinds 1988 beschikbaar is. Het biedt snelle gedeeltelijke updates en geavanceerde meer-laags real-time bescherming van alle infectie bronnen, het beschermd tegen vrijwel alle soorten ongewenste programmas. Avast! is beschikbaar in verschillende versies, van een GRATIS thuis versie tot een netwerkversie speciaal ontwikkeld voor grote bedrijsnetwerken.

Maybe Eddie kan streamline it a bit if nescessary.

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Re:Text translations needed!
« Reply #2 on: September 02, 2004, 02:08:29 PM »
Brasilian Portuguese:

O antivirus Avast! está baseado na avançada tecnologia de escaneamento da ALWIL Software, disponível desde 1988. Caracteriza-se por suas atualizações incrementais rápidas e pela proteção on-line de provedores independentes, protegendo-o contra todos os tipos de infecções. O Avast! é oferecido em múltiplas versões, incluindo a versão Home GRATUITA e a versão Network  projetada para grandes redes corporativas.

Changed! ;)
« Last Edit: September 03, 2004, 02:24:15 PM by Technical »
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Re:Text translations needed!
« Reply #3 on: September 02, 2004, 06:12:31 PM »
Hi Vlk,
Avast! antivirus is based on the comprehensive ALWIL Software scanning technology available since 1988. Featuring fast incremental updates and advanced multi-layer real-time protection of all infection vectors, it safeguards against virtually all kinds of malware. Avast! is offered in multiple editions, including the FREE Home Edition and the Network Edition designed for large corporate networks.
Nice but actually the words kinds of are superfluous. (not needed)
Hope that helps.
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« Reply #4 on: September 02, 2004, 07:18:49 PM »
Hi bob,

English is not my native language, but could it be they mean all kinds as in trojans, worms, scripts, and so on?

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« Reply #5 on: September 02, 2004, 07:36:45 PM »
Hi Peter,
If the words kinds of are meant as a discriptor for the word malware, then I suppose you're correct.
If on the other hand the statement is meant to convey that Avast! protects us against all malware, then those words aren't needed.
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« Reply #6 on: September 02, 2004, 07:57:07 PM »
Agreed, but could you claim you protect again all malware??? Would you want to claim that? I believe there will allways be one that is ahead of you, until you trap that one. Dealing with microsoft (and other large companies), you should be very carefull about what you say.

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« Reply #7 on: September 02, 2004, 08:19:33 PM »
Peter
Again, your right. In that case you could also  leave out the word all and simply say that Avast! protects us against malware.
OR, leave it alone and let every one jump to their own conclusions. ;D
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« Reply #8 on: September 02, 2004, 08:32:27 PM »
I reread the english version and it says "virtually all ..." so we are covered...  ;)

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« Reply #9 on: September 02, 2004, 08:38:18 PM »
Edit: I am "native English" as you so put it, i would say that it is fine as it is.



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« Reply #10 on: September 02, 2004, 08:44:12 PM »
Of course, if any of the native English speakers here has something to say about the text, that would be very welcome as well... :)
Not really... I'm just not native english.

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Re:Text translations needed!
« Reply #11 on: September 03, 2004, 10:39:10 AM »
Thanks so far... Anyone else? French? German? Italiano? Japanese? etc...

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Re:Text translations needed!
« Reply #12 on: September 03, 2004, 02:26:28 PM »
Please, a native speaker of Spanish could correct this crude translation?

El antivirus Avast! se basa en la tecnología comprensiva de escudriñamiento de ALWIL Software disponible desde 1988. Sus rasgos principales son las actualizaciones incrementales rápidas y la protección avanzada en tiempo real de múltiples salvaguardias contra todos los tipos de infección. El Avast! se ofrece en ediciones múltiples, incluyendo la edición Home GRATIS y la edición Network para las grandes redes corporativas.
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« Reply #13 on: September 03, 2004, 08:41:56 PM »
Here is the paragraph in Finnish (I was told earlier that avast! 4.5 will be translated in finnish):

Avast! antivirus on kokonaisvaltaiseen ALWIL Softwaren skannausteknologiaan perustuva ohjelma jo vuodesta 1988. Nopeat päivitykset ja sen edistynyt monitasoinen reaaliaikainen suojaus tarjoavat suojaa kaikentyyppisiä haittaohjelmia vastaan. Avast! on saatavilla monena eri versiona aina ilmaisesta Home Editionista suuriin yritysverkkoihin tarkoitettuun Network Editioniin asti.


« Last Edit: September 10, 2004, 10:59:56 AM by Jeccu »

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« Reply #14 on: September 04, 2004, 05:42:56 PM »
I used www.altavista.com to translate it, is this ok?

Italian

Avast! il antivirus è basato sulla tecnologia completa di esame del software di ALWIL disponibile dal 1988. Caratterizzando gli aggiornamenti incrementali veloci e protezione in tempo reale a più strati avanzata di tutti i vettori di infezione, esso misure di sicurezza contro virtualmente tutti i generi di malware. Avast! è offerto in edizioni multiple, compreso l'edizione domestica LIBERA e l'edizione della rete progettate per le grandi reti corporative


Spanish

Avast! el antivirus se basa en la tecnología comprensiva de la exploración del software de ALWIL disponible desde 1988. Ofreciendo actualizaciones incrementales rápidas y la protección en tiempo real de múltiples capas avanzada de todos los vectores de la infección, él salvaguardias contra virtualmente todas las clases de malware. ¡Avast! se ofrece en ediciones múltiples, incluyendo la edición casera LIBRE y la edición de la red diseñadas para las redes corporativas grandes


German

Avast! antivirus basiert auf der kompletten ALWIL Software-Abtastungtechnologie, die seit 1988 vorhanden ist. Aufmachung schnelle zusätzliche Updates und vorgerückten mehrschichtigen Realzeitschutz aller Infektionvektoren, es Schutz gegen praktisch alle Arten malware. Avast! wird in den mehrfachen Ausgaben, einschließlich die FREIE Hauptausgabe und die Netz-Ausgabe angeboten, die für große private kommunikationsnetze bestimmt sind


French
Avast ! l'antivirus est basé sur la technologie complète de balayage de logiciel d'ALWIL disponible depuis 1988. Comportant les mises à jour par accroissement rapides et la protection en temps réel multicouche avancée de tous les vecteurs d'infection, il sauvegardes contre pratiquement toutes sortes de malware. Avast ! est offert en éditions multiples, y compris l'édition à la maison LIBRE et l'édition de réseau conçues pour de grands réseaux de corporation


Hope this helps

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